06012018

 

06012018

 

name of dream: improvised song 5; rub-a-dub

 

eight or nine two-line impromptu lyrics sung to the tune of Rub A Dub Soldier...

 

i'm just a rub-a-dub soldier,

trying to keep the music alive

 

music makes us feel young as we get older,

keeps the spirit alive

 

looking forward, never over the shoulder,

to a destination, do we ever arrive ?

 

i'm just a rub-a-dub dubbing,

keeping dancing alive

 

singing is a way of romancing,

sweet tunes keeps

love alive

 

can see other people coming,

it's the start of a vibe

 

we're all rub-a-dub soldiers,

a part of the music tribe

 

 

addenda

 

time-tense: 5

 

qod 3.5

 

qos 3.7

 

p

 

vividness

 

stand-out moment:

 

notes 1

 

was awake from the third or fourth line onward

 

which makes this an Externalised Dream

 

notes 2

 

 

utility